Clickbank Questions – Clickbank Mall Script and Product Review Script?
I have a clickbank mall script/marketplace at http://www.rpqm.com but I got only 1% conversion on it. Is it because of the pricing? Probably because of the sales letter. Any suggestion on ow to add more on the conversion rate?
Also, I have a review script at http://www.reviewsscript.com and have a demo at http://demo.reviewsscript.com and http://www.reviewsscript.com/demo2/ even though it is a demo I always have sales in http://demo.reviewsscript.com and only few at http://www.reviewsscript.com/demo2/ but for me the last demo was more appealing. How come it is not? Is it because of the niche? Which is more demanding niche? Thanks!
Best Answer: Ok here is my critic answer so hold on to your seat 
“Warning: “This software is worth more than $147 and if you think this doesn’t worth the price then don’t read the whole concept, you’re just wasting your time. If you didn’t find the value of it. I’m sorry, you’re not qualified in this business!”
REMOVE IT!
“Hold On….All are qualified in this business…It’s very easy on venturing in this business!”
REMOVE IT!
Also remove the entire introduction text, it serves no sales purpose and only distracts your visitor from your message.
Now I am gonna change your “problem” text.
“Are you among those people asking for a solution to ease their job as a clickbank/adsense affiliate? Many try to sell thousands of clickbank products on their site(s) but without a working system and thus they make no money.”
Remove the weblinks in the testimonial “”Excellent Programming Skills!” Just keep the weblink text but do not hyperlink it.
Delete the entire text section in between the testimonial and the explanatory images in the “introduction” section. Again it serves no sales purpose.
Change the line “What can i say” to “Here are the benefits you get from my Clickbank Mall script”
Make bulletpoints in front of each benefit you describe here.
“- Can sell thousands of Clickbank Products, members products and your own products. Can support unlimited products. As an admin you can manage what to display.”
Delete it, folks allready get the message.
“Features:”
Delete it.
Also take everything in what you now call the “Features:” section and include it in your new benefits section also with bulletpoints.
Do not include the texts for each feature but only the feature itself, the text is not necessary.
Delete all testimonials at the bottom, one is sufficient, right now all those testimonials clutter your page and even worse, folks have to read all of them in order to get to your order section!
I also changed your end text where you pursue folks to make the sale, here is my version.
“This script normally sells for $997 but for a limited time you can get this fantastic script for only $147. Admit it, $147 is a steal for this tremendous product. Also any future updates are free when you order today.”
Important, make your headers in the font “Verdana” and use the <H1> header tag. Also make your regular text “Arial” and bold (ALL OF IT!)
And please get rid of the google adsense ads at the bottom of your page
Hope this helps.
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Erol Alici (The Homebiz Tycoon)
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